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1、Topic:Writing School:Minle School Time:13th March,2014,(1)Jacks mother is a doctor.Jacks father is a doctor,too.,Step one:Rewrite the sentences.,Bothand,Not onlybut also,andas well.,as well asis,(2)The box is too heavy.I cant lift it.,sothat,tooto,not enough,(3)It was raining heavily.The farmers wer
2、e still working on the farm.,Although.,but,(4)The woman is our class teacher.The woman has a lot of books in her hands.,The woman whois.,The woman withis.,(5)People feel cold in such weather.,People feel really cold in such freezing weather.People feel extremely cold in such windy weather.,Step two:
3、Make improvements.,I saw some boys.They were playing football on the playground.They were playing happily.,I saw some boys playing football happily on the playground.,(2)It was early in the morning.Mr.Black was in the garden.He was reading a newspaper.Mrs.Black was in the garden,too.She was watering
4、 the flowers.,Early in the morning,Mr.Black was reading a newspaper in the garden while Mrs.Black was watering the flowers.,(3)Shanghai is an international city.Shanghai has many beautiful places.I recommend the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.It is one of the tallest buildings in the world.And I think Yu G
5、arden is also a beautiful place.You can learn about the history of Shanghai and taste delicious food.The Bund is also a beautiful place.You can see buildings of different styles.,Shanghai is an international city which has many beautiful places.First of all,I highly recommend the Oriental Pearl TV T
6、ower which is one of the tallest buildings in the world.Besides,you shouldnt miss Yu Garden because you can learn about the history of Shanghai and taste various delicious local snacks there.Whats more,the Bund is also a good place which is worth visiting.There you can see buildings of different sty
7、les.,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,Summary:,扩写句子：adjectives、adverbs eg.People feel really cold in such freezing weather.,2.用固定的短语：bothand、tooto eg.Both Jacks mother and father are doctors.,3.用连词构成状语从句：although、because eg.Although it was raining heavily,the farmers were still working on the farm.,4.用定语从句、宾语从句等。eg.The woman who has a lot of books in her hands is our class teacher.,Step three:Write about the pictures.,Group One,Group Two,Group Three,Group Four,Group One,Show time!,Group Two,Group Three,Group Four,Develop your paragraph and make itmore logical and meaningful.,Thank you!,
