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1、Error correction&Composition,Zhundong Middle SchoolTony Chen,Although nobody wishes to experience failure,failure play an important role on the way to success.Sometime,failure can benefit us a lot.When I failed my English exam three years before,I felt upset at first,but then I made up my mind to wo
2、rk even hard.That failure motivated me put more time and energy into learning English.After find out my problem was a lack of vocabulary and I was poorly in grammar,I changed my learning methods.I learnt a lot from past mistake.Finally I made a great progress in English.Failure really helped you to
3、get closer to success.,短文改错考查点,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,2,Although nobody wishes to experience failure,failure play an important role on the way to success.Sometime,failure can benefit us a lot.When I failed my English exam three years before,I felt upset at first,but then I made up my mind to work even hard.T
4、hat failure motivated me put more time and energy into learning English.After find out my problem was a lack of vocabulary and I was poorly in grammar,I changed my learning methods.I learnt a lot from past mistake.Finally I made a great progress in English.Failure really helped you to get closer to
5、success.,Although nobody wishes to experience failure,failure plays an important role on the way to success.Sometimes,failure can benefit us a lot.When I failed my English exam three years ago,I felt upset at first,but then I made up my mind to work even harder.That failure motivated me to put more
6、time and energy into learning English.After finding out my problem was a lack of vocabulary and I was poor in grammar,I changed my learning methods.I learnt a lot from past mistakes.Finally I made a great progress in English.Failure really helped me to get closer to success.,playsometimebeforehardmo
7、tivated me putfindpoorlymistakemade a great progressyou,playssometimesagohardermotivated me to putfindingpoormistakesmade great progressme,时态语态主谓一致,连接词,介词,副词形容词,介词,非谓语动词,副词形容词,名词单复数,冠词,代词,8,1,1,Although most people have a family,in their darkest moments many will turn to nobody they consider“a true
8、friend”for support and advice.But what make someone“a true friend”,rather than just a good friend?A true friend will always try harder help.They will be sensitive to their feelings and will not criticize you.They will offer help without being asking and will never expect anything in return.A true fr
9、iend will put aside whichever they are doing to come and see you if you are in seriously trouble.They will offer their support in your need,as if everyone else in the world is against you.If you dont have many friends,but you have one true friend,and you are very lucky.But remember,if you have a tru
10、e friend,you have to be his true friend too.True friend give as well as take.,Although most people have a family,in their darkest moments many will turn to somebody they consider“a true friend”for support and advice.But what makes someone“a true friend”,rather than just a good friend?A true friend w
11、ill always try harder to help.They will be sensitive to your feelings and will not criticize you.They will offer help without being asked and will never expect anything in return.A true friend will put aside whatever they are doing to come and see you if you are in serious trouble.They will offer th
12、eir support in your need,even if everyone else in the world is against you.If you dont have many friends,but you have one true friend,and you are very lucky.But remember,if you have a true friend,you have to be his true friend too.True friends give as well as take.,8,1,1,Dear Sir,I am Li Hua.I am bo
13、rn in 1992 and I am going to graduate in senior high school.I am willing to be a volunteer in your charity after graduate.I am out-going and warm-hearted boy.I have many hobby.I can also do good in communicating with other.The reason why that I want to be a volunteer is that I can practice myself fr
14、om the work and I love help others.This job can give him a chance to make my dreams come true.I need such experience.best wishes,Li Hua,Dear Sir,I am Li Hua.I was born in 1992 and I am going to graduate from senior high school.I am willing to be a volunteer in your charity after graduating.I am an o
15、ut-going and warm-hearted boy.I have many hobbies.I can also do well in communicating with others.The reason why I want to be a volunteer is that I can practice myself from the work and I love helping others.This job can give me a chance to make my dream come true.I need such experience.best wishes,
16、Li Hua,9,1,1,较好拿到的分数有：名词单复数/形容词副词/冠词/代词,做题时应注意：叙事性文章首抓全文时态，以免理解有误；论述性文章首抓名词形容词冠词代词错误,小结,Composition,假如你是李华，即将高中毕业，打算毕业后利用假期时间去一家慈善机构做一名义工。现根据以下内容写一封信介绍你自己，希望成为一名志愿者。1.1992年出生2.热情开朗，兴趣广泛，擅长沟通，语言表达能力强3.请陈述你想成为志愿者的理由,Dear Sir,I am Li Hua.I was born in 1992 and I am going to graduate from senior high sc
17、hool.I am willing to be a volunteer in your charity after graduating.I am an out-going and warm-hearted boy.I have many hobbies.I can also do well in communicating with others.The reason why I want to be a volunteer is that I can practice myself from the work and I love helping others.This job can g
18、ive me a chance to make my dream come true.I need such experience.best wishes,Li Hua,17,小练习,当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book,which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：1、看电影：省时、有趣、易懂 2、读原著：细节更多、语言优美 3、我的看法及理由 注意：1、词数：100-120 文章题目和开头已给出（不计入词数）。2、参考词汇：original work 或 book in the original（原著
19、）,关于人们有不同的观点。一些人认为 There are different opinions(among people)as to _.Some people suggest that _.as to:就而言，至于,任何事物都是有两面性，也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不 利的一面。Everything has two sides and _ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.Exception:例外；例外的事,作文模板（开头）,However,just like everything has both
20、its good and bad sides,_also has its own disadvantages,such as _.然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，也有它的不利的一 面，象,相反，有一些人赞成，他们相信，而且，他们认为。On the contrary，there are some people in favor of _.At the same time，they say_.On the contrary:正相反In favor of：赞同；赞成,作文模板（中间）,Theres no doubt that毫无疑问,As far as I am concerned,I 就我而言on one hand,on the other hand,一方面另一方面,涨分经典句,For these reasons,I suggested that we should 出于这些缘由，我建议我们应当,涨分经典句,Thank you for listening!,
