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1、雅思写作开头、结尾写法【探讨】,【主讲：牙哥】环球英语网校直播课堂,TR=Task ResponseCC=cohesion and CoherenceLR=Lexical ResourceGRA=Grammar&Accuracy,雅思写作评分标准,3,As an international tourist,one should always adhere to the local customs as a rule while the traveling.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Traveling=?Adhere to=?Customs=
2、？Cultural diversity=cultural mosaic=cultural legacy,traveling=Tourism/journey/vacation/holiday/Adhere to=abide by/comply with/conform to/cling toCustoms=traditions/hobbies/personal habits,什么是好的开头,Clear,simpleLess memorization,higher band scoreWithin 5 minutesParaphrase,惨不忍睹版的开头-各种想吐,Countrys health
3、budget as a part of government budget is more and more concerned by government.Government spent much money or countrys health,like the public health service.In my opinion,rather than put enormous money to cure people,it is better to spend money on prevention how to get away from some disease.,2023/8
4、/7,题目：exposure to international media,e.g.films,tv and magazines,has an impact on the local culture.to what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?开头段：With the development of the global media industry,traditional custom has been influenced undeniably.Some people suggest that t
5、he information from other countries bring us much profitability to our current culture.,Sample:,开头写法-A,Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom.Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh
6、the disadvantages?利弊提问方式,A地主版开头,For the last thirty years or so,more emphasis has been placed on the way of offering qualifications,and it has been argued that acquiring qualification through distant learning from Internet will be more attractive than through studying in classroom.However,compared w
7、ith professors,the Internet cannot communicate with students sufficiently.,A贵族版开头,Qualification is linked to a persons academic performance.In the past,people had to spend much time in attending classes to pass the examination such as lawyer and architect vocational qualification.Nevertheless,It see
8、ms that a large number of people acquire relevant professional qualification via classes online easily at present.The advantages of this practice far exceed the disadvantages in my opinion.,A平民版,Nowadays,the distant learning through internet is progressing rapidly on various fronts.Yet at the same t
9、ime,whether we should offer qualification through distant learning has sparked much debate.Some people think studying in classroom is better,while others disagree.Personally,I am in favor of the former view.,1.Definition2.Past3.Now好的开头有逻辑，无模板！,对比：时间对比past,now,future 关系对比 individual,society,开头写法-B,Le
10、arning a foreign language offers an insight into how people from other cultures think and see the world.The teaching of a foreign language should be compulsory at all primary schools.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?Agree or Disagree提问方式,B地主版,The recent years has seen a heated
11、discussion over whether learning a foreign language is necessary.Some people suggest that all primary schools are obligated to include foreign language as an indispensable part of curriculum.This allegation is flawed,as far as I am concerned.,B贵族版,Language is linked to the identity of a nation,and s
12、peakers of a common language share many things,but does this give governments the right to restrict the way language is used or taught?,DefinitionHoweverQuestion,B平民版,In the present age,foreign languages are becoming increasingly essential in peoples daily life.But in the meantime,whether the teachi
13、ng of a foreign language should be compulsory at all primary schools has aroused spirited discussion.Some people say that we should teach a foreign language in schools,while others disagree.As I see it,I find this view ill-founded.,开头写法-C,Should parents be obliged to immunize their children against
14、common childhood diseases？Or do individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?AD=agree or disagree类型,C地主版,More emphasis,in recent years,has been placed on health problems for children.However,people are still at crossroads whether parents are obligated to immunize their childre
15、n in order to prevent various medical complaints or they are blessed with the right not to.,C贵族版,The issue of whether we should force parents to immunize their children against common diseases is,in my opinion,a social rather than a medical question.Since we are free to choose what we expose our bod
16、ies to in the way of food,drink,or religion for that matter,why should the question of medical treatment be any different？,Definition因&果Question,C贵族版2,Some people argue that the state does not have the right to make parents immunize their children.However,I feel the question is not whether they shou
17、ld immunize but whether,as members of society,they have the right not to.,Paraphrase转折&对比,C平民版,With the rapid development of science and technology,children are playing important roles in our lives.However,when it comes to whether parents should be obliged to immunize their children against common c
18、hildhood diseases,people hold divergent views.Some people think the government should make parents do this,while others disagree.Speaking for myself,I agree with the latter view.,开头写法-D,In many major cities of the world,you will find large public buildings,both new and old.Do the advantages exceed i
19、ts disadvantages?利弊提问方式,D地主版,As the century continues,an increasing number of public constructions are being established in megacities globally.In this essay,I intend to compare the benefits and drawbacks of this development.,D贵族版,A public building is a building that belongs in some way to the state
20、./The number of public buildings in any town or village will depend on the size of that community and its needs./For example,you will usually find a town hall of some sort,a school and a place of worship at the least.In larger communities there will be a police station,law courts,a library and maybe
21、 a theatre funded by the state.,Definition定性For Example,D平民版,When involved in a dilemma of whether we should build so many public buildings or not,quite a few would deem that building public buildings is a good thing,but others,on the other hand,harbor a notion that this is a bad thing.Among numerou
22、s ingredients which influence the decision,there are several conspicuous aspects as follows.,烤鸭-对号入座,贵族版:备考时间充足或6分及以上基础地主版:备考时间不足或4.5分-5.5分基础平民版：准备时间不充分，基础非常差，建议背诵模板。,开头关键：,在5分钟内写完paraphrase题目,改写练习【1】,题目Personal happiness is closely related to economic success.,改写练习【1】,题目 Personal happiness is close
23、ly related to economic success.改写后的 Individual happiness is determined by the wealth he or she owns.,改写练习【2】,题目Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program.,改写练习【2】,题目 Unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school program.改写后的It is justified for h
24、igh schools to include voluntary work as an indispensable component of curriculum.High school students are encouraged to participate in voluntary work as a necessary part of courses.,题目改写训练【3】,题目Schools should select their pupils according to their academic ability.,题目改写训练【3】,题目Schools should select
25、 their pupils according to their academic ability.改写后的：It is reasonable for schools to take academic performance as the only criterion for enrolling students.,2023/8/7,in summary,to sum up,in the end,at last,finally,taking all the factors into consideration,with all the aspects carefully considered,
26、judging from all the evidences offered Im convinced that,.,雅思写作结尾,2023/8/7,According to the facts outlined above,one understands that For these reasons,I feel strongly that、Personally,In the final analysis,Based on the facts outlined above,one can understand that,普通结尾,2023/8/7,In conclusion，To conclude,As shown above,As suggested above,It seems obvious thatUltimately,Undoubtedly,Evidently,优秀版结尾,微博：牙哥spensor,
