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1、为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,某校开展了以“How to keep safe” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿。 要点:1. 慎重交友;2.遇险报警; 3. 安全饮食;4. 其它(1-2点)注意:1.可适当增加情节,使行文连贯。 2. 词数:90-110,字迹工整。,认真审题,找出文章要表达的要点,确定文章的人称,时态。,写作第一步,审,为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,某校开展了以“How to keep safe” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇演讲稿。 要点:1. 慎重交友;2.遇险报警; 3.
2、 安全饮食;4. 其它(1-2点)注意:1.可适当增加情节,使行文连贯。 2. 词数:90-110,字迹工整。,结尾,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,文章要点短语,交友:be careful to make friends遇险:be in danger call the police for help in time饮食:eat healthy and safe food be bad for our health 其它:keep away from water, fire its dangerous to swim in the river,加,加首尾,使结构完整。可以采取
3、总分总结构或者总分结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁,漂亮。,写作第三步:,be careful to make friendsbe in dangercall the police for help in timeeat healthily and safelybe bad for our healthy keep away from water, fireits dangerous to swim in the river,As teenagers, we Here are some of my suggestions.,In a word, we should,a nice head,a
4、nice tail,a nice body,连,恰当运用关联词句,使得文章层次清晰,各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步:,你如何写开头,1.开头常用词语: as far as we know 据我们所知 as everybody knows 众所周知at present 目前 first of all 首先 To tell the truth 老实说,添加过度次,使行文连贯,顺序:first( at first, first of all, to begin with), second( then, next), finally( at last, in the end)whats more(而且
5、), besides(另外),and, but, however, or, so, becuaseon the one hand, on the other handnot only but also ,1.结尾常用词语: after all 毕竟at last 最后in a word 总而言之finally, 最后we hope that 我们希望 In short 简言之,你如何写结尾,美,选好词句,美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步:,长句短句交叉使用最好。基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句,文章算不上完美,但很实用。把握要点,层次清晰。注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡
6、自然,行文连贯,注意适当使用连词, 例如:and ,so ,or, but, become等等。,查,认真检查,改正错误。1)格式是否有错。2)拼写有无错误,大小写。3)语言是否用错。4)时态、语态错误。5)标点错误。6)人称是否用错。,写作第六步:,相互交换批改,中考作文评分标准,第一档(13-15分)信息完整,表达流畅,无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档(10-12分)信息基本完整,表达较流畅,有少量语言错误,但不影响意思表达。第三档(7-9分)能传达部分信息,表达不够流畅,语言错误较多,但句子基本可读。 第四档(4-6分)只能传达少量信息,表达不流畅,语言错误多,只有少量句子可读。 第五
7、档(1-3分)只能传达个别信息,表达不清楚,只有个别句子可读。,How to keep safe,As teenagers, we should keep safety in mind. But how canwe keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First of all, we should be careful when we make friends,especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must callthe police for help in time so
8、that we can keep ourselves safe.Besides, we should eat healthy and safe food. Because eatingfood that goes bad will be bad for our healthy. Whats more, itsdangerous to swim in the river. So we should keep away fromwater. At last, we should be careful while riding bikes orwalking across the road. In a word, we should take care of ourselves carefully.,