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1、六类作文行文思路,2023/9/24,2,从写作类型上来看，提纲式文字命题作文和提纲式图表命题作文主要分为：,现象解释型 2.问题解决型 3.对比选择型 4.观点论证型 5.记叙文 6.应用文,1.现象解释型,2023/9/24,4,现象解释型,特点：现象解释型作文通常要求考生从试题的提示性文字、图表或图画入手，描述提示性文字、图表或图画中反映出的现象，对该现象进行解释说明，分析其原因并加以评论。,基本结构：1.描述现象并说明其现状；2.分析这种现象的原因或相关因素；3.提出建议或总结观点。,2023/9/24,5,Example 1 2006.6真题,Directions:For this
2、part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Students Selecting Their Lecturers.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课老师学生选择老师时所考虑的主要因素学生自选任课老师的益处和可能产生的问题,2023/9/24,6,On Students Selecting Their Lecturers,Nowadays,many univers
3、ities entitle the students to choose freely the lectures for course,which has aroused common concern.What impresses us most is that this new policy is becoming more and more popular among students.There are many different factors deciding the students choosing lecturers for courses.First of all,a te
4、achers professional knowledge and ability play a critical role in students making their final decision.Whats more,teaching methods and skills are also essential factors that students will take into account.For example,New Oriental School has attracted lots of students to a large extent because of th
5、e teachers unique teaching methods.In addition,a teachers humor sense is also what many students will consider.Therefore,the freedom of choosing lecturers to some extent is beneficial to students in their study.As far as I am concerned,as everything has its pros and cons,the freedom of choosing lect
6、ures can not only benefit students but also bring some problems.On the one hand,students can enrich their knowledge and broaden their vision under the direction of some competent lecturers.On the other hand,since it is a free choice,the excellent teachers will become the focus of most students choic
7、e,which will lead to an unreasonable class size and influence teaching effect seriously.In a word,students should be prudent in deciding which lecturer to choose according to their own need.,参考范文,2023/9/24,7,On Students Selecting Their Lecturers,Nowadays,many universities entitle the students to cho
8、ose freely the lectures for course,which has aroused common concern.What impresses us most is that this new policy is becoming more and more popular among students.There are many different factors deciding the students choosing lecturers for courses.First of all,a teachers professional knowledge and
9、 ability play a critical role in students making their final decision.Whats more,teaching methods and skills are also essential factors that students will take into account.For example,New Oriental School has attracted lots of students to a large extent because of the teachers unique teaching method
10、s.In addition,a teachers humor sense is also what many students will consider.Therefore,the freedom of choosing lecturers to some extent is beneficial to students in their study.As far as I am concerned,as everything has its pros and cons,the freedom of choosing lectures can not only benefit student
11、s but also bring some problems.On the one hand,students can enrich their knowledge and broaden their vision under the direction of some competent lecturers.On the other hand,since it is a free choice,the excellent teachers will become the focus of most students choice,which will lead to an unreasona
12、ble class size and influence teaching effect seriously.In a word,students should be prudent in deciding which lecturer to choose according to their own need.,参考范文,2023/9/24,8,Topic,Nowadays 总述社会现象，which has aroused great/common concern./From the chart/graph/table/picture,we learn that nowadays 总述社会现
13、象，which has aroused great/common concern.What impresses us most is 现象突出表现.There are many factors accounting for 现象或变化.There are many different factors deciding 该现象或其相关情况./该现象 has a great effect on 影响的主要对象.First of all/Above all,原因一/因素一/影响一.What is more/Moreover,原因二/因素二/影响二.For example/For instance,举
14、例说明原因二/因素二/影响二.In addition,原因三/因素三/影响三.Therefore,原因/因素/影响导致的结果.As to me/As far as I am concerned,我的观点.For one thing/On the one hand,理由一/影响一.For another/On the other hand,理由二/影响二.Thus/In brief/Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration,I may reasonably conclude that 总结全文.,行文思路1,2023/9/24,9,Exa
15、mple 2,Direction:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled What Electives to Choose.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:各大学开设了各种各样的选修课学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课以你自己为例,2023/9/24,10,What Electives to Choose,Nowadays,many universities are opening vario
16、us electives for students to choose,which has aroused great concern.Optional courses provide a good chance for students to make better use of their spare time.In addition,they are a benificial supplement to the limited required courses.There are many different factors deciding what electives student
17、s choose.Among all these factors,the interests of the students play a very important role.The students,of courses,would like to learn what they are interested in.Moreover,many students will consider whether they could learn some practical skill by the electives,because nowadays companies are placing
18、 emphasis on a candidates practical skills.Besides,the ability and the prestige of the teacher who teaches the elective will also influence one students choice.Therefore,it is no wonder that different students may choose different optional courses.As to me,I choose history as one of my electives bec
19、ause not only can it enrich my knowledge but also it is one of my favorite subjects since I was a child.Besides,by learning this course,I feel the happiness of combining study and recreation.In a word,different electives have different topics.so we should choose the one suitable to us according to o
20、ur needs.,参考范文,2023/9/24,11,What Electives to Choose,Nowadays,many universities are opening various electives for students to choose,which has aroused great concern.Optional courses provide a good chance for students to make better use of their spare time.In addition,they are a benificial supplement
21、 to the limited required courses.There are many different factors deciding what electives students choose.Among all these factors,the interests of the students play a very important role.The students,of course,will consider whether they could learn some practical skill by the electives,because nowad
22、ays companies are placing emphasis on a candidates practical skills.Besides,the ability and the prestige of the teacher who teaches the elective will also influence one students choice.Therefore,it is no wonder that different students may choose different optional courses.As to me,I choose history a
23、s one of my electives because not only can it enrich my knowledge but also it is one of my favorite subjects since I was a child.Besides,by learning this course,I feel the happiness of combining study and recreation.In a word,different electives have different topics.So we should choose the one suit
24、able to us according to our needs.,参考范文,2023/9/24,12,行文思路2 Topic,Nowadays,总体现象，which has aroused great/common concern./总体现象 has been brought into focus.现象表现或变化.In addition,进一步阐述现象.There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon./The reasons for this phenomenon are varied./There are many differ
25、ent factors deciding 该现象或其他相关情况./该情况 has a great effort on 影响的主要对象.Among all these reasons/factors/efforts,原因一/因素一/影响一 play/plays a critical role.具体阐述原因一/因素一/影响一.Whats more/Moreover,原因二/因素二/影响二.Besides,原因三/因素三/影响三.Therefore,最终结果或影响.As far as I am concerned/As to me,我的观点/态度/做法.Furthermore/Besides,进一步
26、说明.In a word,总结全文.,2023/9/24,13,Example 3 2002.6真题,Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use of Computers.You should write at least 120 words,and base your composition on the chart and the outline given in Chinese below:上图所示为1990年、1995年、2000年
27、某校大学生使用计算机的情况，请描述其变化说明发生这些变化的原因（可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展等方面加以说明）你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难和问题,2023/9/24,14,Student Use of Computers,According to the chart,it is clear that the student use of computers has grown rapidly in recent years.The chart shows,from 1990 to 1995,the average hours that students spent on comp
28、uters in every week were only doubled,while in 2000,the number grew to 20 hours,which is five times as many as that of 1995.Many reasons contribute to this tremendous growth.First of all,the low price of the computer allows many students to have one in their dormitories.So the students can often use
29、 their computers to do the assignments,play games and chat with their friends.Moreover,many net bars provide students convenient access to computers.In addition,Internet provides students an amazing world to explore.As a result,computers have an irresistible attraction to them.As far as I am concern
30、ed,there are still problems in student use of computers.For one thing,students dont have enough skills to command computers,which limits their full use of computers.For another,students who are short of self-disciplines may forget their main task of study.To conclude,effective measures should be tak
31、en for students to guarantee the reasonable use of computers.,参考范文,2023/9/24,15,Student Use of Computers,According to the chart,it is clear that the student use of computers has grown rapidly in recent years.The chart shows,from 1990 to 1995,the average hours that students spent on computers in ever
32、y week were only doubled,while in 2000,the number grew to 20 hours,which is five times as many as that of 1995.Many reasons contribute to this tremendous growth.First of all,the low price of the computer allows many students to have one in their dormitories.So the students can often use their comput
33、ers to do the assignments,play games and chat with their friends.Moreover,many net bars provide students convenient access to computers.In addition,Internet provides students an amazing world to explore.As a result,computers have an irresistible attraction to them.As far as I am concerned,there are
34、still problems in student use of computers.For one thing,students dont have enough skills to command computers,which limits their full use of computers.For another,students who are short of self-disciplines may forget their main task of study.To conclude,effective measures should be taken for studen
35、ts to guarantee the reasonable use of computers.,参考范文,2023/9/24,16,Topic,According to the chart/graph/table/picture,it is clear that(图表/图画内容总概括).The chart/graph/table/picture shows,(描述图表/图画内容一）,while(描述图表/图画内容二）.Many reasons/factors contribute to.(该现象）./（该现象）has a great effect on（影响的主要对象）.First of all,/Above all,（原因一/因素一/影响一.Moreover,/What is more(原因二/因素二/影响二）.In addition/Besides（原因三/因素三/影响三）.As a result,（段落总结句）.As to me/As far as I am concerned,(我的观点）.For one thing/On the one hand,（理由一/影响一）.For another,/On the other hand,(理由二/影响二）.To conclude,(总结全文）.,行文思路 3,
